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Knuckles the echidna, guardian of the master emerald, he lives with his father and mother, Locke the echidna and Lara-Le, with her sister Tikal the echidna, his not lover Julie-su the echidna, and her cousin Shade the echinda and with some other echidnas warriors, Knuckles, was the guardian of the master emerald and the next king. Tikal is the little princess and little sister of Knuckles, meanwhile Knuckles protects the master emerald, she protect all the little and cute chaos, Shade protects a little temple, and Julie-su only wants to see Knuckles, she is crazy in love with him, but Knuckles doesn't love her. One day, doctor Eggman was trying to steal the master emerald again

Knuckles: HEY! LEAVE THE MASTER EMERALD ON HER PLACE!!

Eggman: Or what?!

Shade: Or we will kill you

Eggman: *sarcastic* Oh! i'm so scary! why you don't tell that to your little sister?

Knuckles: What?!

Tikal: AAAAAH BROTHER, HELP ME!!!!

Shade: TIKAL!!!

Knuckles: LEAVE HER ALONE!!

Eggman: Or what?

Shade: Or, her friend will be so mad with you

Eggman: What friend?

Then out of now where, a blue and celestic hand, grab Tikal's belt and pull her to him, it was Chaos! Tikal's best friend and a protector of the chaos

Tikal: Chaos! thank you

Chaos smiles and watch Eggman with anger

Knuckles: Chaos! take Tikal with our parents, please take care of her

Chaos takes Tikal to her parents, Eggman was so mad with them

Eggman: UGH! THAT'S IT, COMMANDER ATTACK

???: Yes master

Shade: Knuckles! i will take care of egg-head

Eggman: HEY!

Shade: You must attack the commander!

Knuckles: Fine! take care

The war take hours, Shade finally defeats Eggman and he returns the Master Emerald and he escape, but with knuckles, the fight was still on, Knuckles was tired, but with all his energy, he punch so storng to Eggman's commander

???: Auch!

Shade: Finally! now, let's so who is it

Shade slowly takes the mask and Shade finally takes the mask away, they got shock, it was a woman, it was a bat woman, she was white and her eyes where like the color of the master emerald

Shade: What's your name?

???:... I'm Rouge the bat

Shade: So then, Rouge, you must come wih us

Rouge: Why i should?!

Shade: IS AN ORDER!!!

Knuckles and Shade takes Rouge arms and the take her to their home

Locke: So, you work by Eggman huh?!

Rouge: Yes! so?!

Julie-su: Did you know that people like you must be killed?

Rouge:....

Tikal: Father wait! please giver a chance.... she can be one of us

Everyone turns aroud to see Tikal

Locke: I don't know Tikal, you know from who she works

Tikal: I know, but i don't really want to see people being killed, please father! just one chance, that's all

Locke:.... fine! but she will go to the jail, and if she changes her actitude, i will give her a better place

Tikal: Thanks father

Locke: Knuckles! take miss Rouge to the jail

Knuckles: Yes father

Julie-su: I can go with you Knux?

Knuckles: Um... no thanks

Julie-su: Okay *whisper* call me

When Knuckles was taking Rouge to the jail

Rouge: Auch!

Knuckles: Now what?!

Rouge: You are hurting me!

Knuckles: No, i'm not... mh!

Knuckles noticed that Rouge arm was bleeding, and he remember the powerful punch that he give her, so he take some medicinal plants and put it in Rouge's arms

Rouge: What are you doing?

Knuckles: *sigh* Just relax, i'm healing you

Rouge:.... thanks

Knuckles: mh?

Rouge:.... i said thanks, for... healing my arm

Knuckles: Oh! no problem, well that's all, the next day your arm will be okay

Rouge:... thanks, again *smiles*

Knuckles: *smiles back* no problem

So then, Rouge pass all the night in the jail
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END OF PART 1 :)
My first knuxouge story, enjoy :)

Next: soon

Please comment, fave but the most important thing.... COMMENT :iconheadacheplz: i HATE faves without comments >_>.... really
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maddigirl1999 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Wow cool~
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AllytheWolffy98 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thanks :D
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KNUXOUGE123SONAMY123 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
cant wait for the next
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Illuniaone Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student General Artist
AMAZING!!!!! please, make more!
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AllytheWolffy98 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
sure :) ^^; when i have time, is just that you know, i have school and all of that, but of course i will continue :)
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Illuniaone Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student General Artist
I know. I have a lot of work to do, but anyway, I'm glad that you will continue!
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AllytheWolffy98 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:)
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JennitheCat Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
this is awesome!!!!
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:iconallythewolffy98:
AllytheWolffy98 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thanks :3
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JennitheCat Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
no prob ^^
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